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Month: November 2018

Revised Paragraphs, Project 3

Revised Paragraphs, Project 3

Another example of this can be seen in Hannah’s narrative, Expect The Unexpected. Hannah had written about the time she wrote about her brother’s death for her college essay writing assignment one year. She explains how “this simple essay was so meaningful to me. I was incredibly proud and had nothing but the utmost confidence in my work” (???).  Hannah was so confident and proud of herself and expected her teacher would feel the same way towards her paper, but…

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Revision Plan, project 3

Revision Plan, project 3

In my essay, my peers think I am adding and affirming to the ideas of Alexander and Brandt. I have evidence that supports the idea of sponsorship and how there are two different types by pulling examples from literacy narratives.  I also have evidence supporting Alexanders idea of identity shifts. My narratives reveal that teachers are very direct sponsors to students and that their identities shift towards the end sometimes. One of the strongest parts of my paper that my…

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Engaging the Literacy Acquisition Conversation – Sample Barclay’s Paragraphs

Engaging the Literacy Acquisition Conversation – Sample Barclay’s Paragraphs

these show me connecting my idea of how teachers affect students The way teachers represent themselves and their attitudes have a greater effect than they realize on their students. Teachers are supposed to be the role model for students and set the tone for their learning and understanding of difficult material. Different examples of this can be found in literacy narratives written by older students like the one Shamus Gorman wrote, The 180. Shamus writes, “There are teachers who will…

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I am interested in looking at the effect that teachers have on students. Also, how is corresponds with sponsorship, whether it be withholding or facilitating it. Then I would look at how many of the narratives had a withholding teacher sponsor but then looked back and realized they were helping. Alexandra White Ronnie Mwai Paige Hibbard Ashley McCarthy shamus Gorman Hannah D abbey small

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